shute gie dekhlam bhor 4 te baaje
ghorir knaata duto jeno shorkaari office er clerk
controversy heen jibone nijeder kaaj kore jaache
tomaar phone er jonye opekhya kore kore
6 ta ghonta kete geche
shonibaar shondhyer discotheque duniyaar protyekta awaaj i
mone hoeche phone er korkosh ringtone
ghorir tick tick o aaj jeno cring cring
mathaar bhitor ghurpaak khawa
" shorir kharaap", " accident", "loot", " rahajaani", " rape" kothagulo
jokhon klanto hoe ektu jiroche
tokhon i sms e bheshe uthlo tomar ashash baarta
"bhaalo aachi...ghumie porechilam"
ghorir knaata duto jeno shorkaari office er clerk
controversy heen jibone nijeder kaaj kore jaache
tomaar phone er jonye opekhya kore kore
6 ta ghonta kete geche
shonibaar shondhyer discotheque duniyaar protyekta awaaj i
mone hoeche phone er korkosh ringtone
ghorir tick tick o aaj jeno cring cring
mathaar bhitor ghurpaak khawa
" shorir kharaap", " accident", "loot", " rahajaani", " rape" kothagulo
jokhon klanto hoe ektu jiroche
tokhon i sms e bheshe uthlo tomar ashash baarta
"bhaalo aachi...ghumie porechilam"
bhoy ebong anxiety r catharsis shesh
mathaar modhye ohetuk kharap shobdoder pashbaalish
abar bichhanai...
3 comments:
thank you abin c....for your unflinching criticism...and the razor edges that have made this poem sharper
trust me brother, I wont give u the unkindest 'cut'...
" i do not want to remain a coy master
false criticisms hurt faster"
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