Sunday, December 25, 2011

Come Over

COME OVER TONIGHT
LIKE LAZY FOG OVER MOUNTAINS
MISTY RAINBOWS INSIDE FOUNTAINS
COME OVER TONIGHT

COME OVER TONIGHT
LIKE BEATEN SOLDIERS CRAWLING HOME
LIKE VICTORIOUS CAESAR REACHING ROME
COME OVER TONIGHT

COME OVER TONIGHT
LIKE PRIDE THAT RIDES A MOTHER'S SMILE
TEARS THAT TRAVEL A MILLION MILES
COME OVER TONIGHT

COME OVER TONIGHT
LIKE STALE MEMORIES IN ALBUM PAGES

LIKE DIRTY WORDS DURING ANGRY RAGES
COME OVER TONIGHT.

COME OVER TONIGHT
LIKE STIFLED SORRYS IN AFTER FIGHTS
MUFFLED WARMTH DURING WINTER NIGHTS
COME OVER.......

10 comments:

Suchetana lahiri said...

HMM....GOOD...WITH DAYS U JUST WRITE BETTER AND BETTER....

Laura Maria said...

Excellent writing! The repetition, similes, and rhyme worked really well.

sayan said...

thank you Laura Maria....glad you liked it...

Kim Nelson said...

Am I following?
The two have experienced so much, good and bad. Whatever the consequence...
Come over...

booguloo said...

I like it!

sayan said...

yes..kim nelson...you are following...bridging the gap..walking the bridges...come over...


Booguloo....thank you..

Andy said...

Hello.
The repetition adds depth & intrigue.
Lovely piece of writing.
Thanks for sharing.

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Andy said...

I forgot to add that your header photo is magnificent!

sayan said...

Andy..thank you...feels good to be read and appreciated...
and about the header photo..there is a sea beach in the south of india..kovalam..took the pic there last year when i visited..they say, its god's own country

fяєє ѕριяιт said...

One of my favourites now. Good going Frisco !