COME OVER TONIGHT
LIKE LAZY FOG OVER MOUNTAINS
MISTY RAINBOWS INSIDE FOUNTAINS
COME OVER TONIGHT
COME OVER TONIGHT
LIKE BEATEN SOLDIERS CRAWLING HOME
LIKE VICTORIOUS CAESAR REACHING ROME
COME OVER TONIGHT
COME OVER TONIGHT
LIKE PRIDE THAT RIDES A MOTHER'S SMILE
TEARS THAT TRAVEL A MILLION MILES
COME OVER TONIGHT
COME OVER TONIGHT
LIKE STALE MEMORIES IN ALBUM PAGES
LIKE DIRTY WORDS DURING ANGRY RAGES
COME OVER TONIGHT.
COME OVER TONIGHT
LIKE STIFLED SORRYS IN AFTER FIGHTS
MUFFLED WARMTH DURING WINTER NIGHTS
COME OVER.......
LIKE LAZY FOG OVER MOUNTAINS
MISTY RAINBOWS INSIDE FOUNTAINS
COME OVER TONIGHT
COME OVER TONIGHT
LIKE BEATEN SOLDIERS CRAWLING HOME
LIKE VICTORIOUS CAESAR REACHING ROME
COME OVER TONIGHT
COME OVER TONIGHT
LIKE PRIDE THAT RIDES A MOTHER'S SMILE
TEARS THAT TRAVEL A MILLION MILES
COME OVER TONIGHT
COME OVER TONIGHT
LIKE STALE MEMORIES IN ALBUM PAGES
LIKE DIRTY WORDS DURING ANGRY RAGES
COME OVER TONIGHT.
COME OVER TONIGHT
LIKE STIFLED SORRYS IN AFTER FIGHTS
MUFFLED WARMTH DURING WINTER NIGHTS
COME OVER.......
10 comments:
HMM....GOOD...WITH DAYS U JUST WRITE BETTER AND BETTER....
Excellent writing! The repetition, similes, and rhyme worked really well.
thank you Laura Maria....glad you liked it...
Am I following?
The two have experienced so much, good and bad. Whatever the consequence...
Come over...
I like it!
yes..kim nelson...you are following...bridging the gap..walking the bridges...come over...
Booguloo....thank you..
Hello.
The repetition adds depth & intrigue.
Lovely piece of writing.
Thanks for sharing.
Take Me Under Your Special Wings
I forgot to add that your header photo is magnificent!
Andy..thank you...feels good to be read and appreciated...
and about the header photo..there is a sea beach in the south of india..kovalam..took the pic there last year when i visited..they say, its god's own country
One of my favourites now. Good going Frisco !
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